My main concern is that I did not have the essay done in time for the due date
My group mainly said that the essay was “better then i thought” Maing they where trying not to hurt my feelings
I worked the best best with Gee when I compared the idea between Cuddys views on Primary and secondary discourse. Mainly they thing I can improve in my way of “conveying” the point Nattily
I work the best with Cuddy when i contrast her view on Faking it till they make it, mainly I should also work with conveying the point with more consistory.
My biggest challenge to work on is my use of language to make my idea more clear to people in the text I make and in general get better ideas to convey in the text itself. Mainly my third paragraph really needs a haul maybe a delete. Mainly i should just get ride of it and When I rewrite I will see it differently. Mainly what i need to do is read this out loud and fix things
My Peers have illustrated that i need to redo the entire essay and make better points as well as work hard to move forward on realistic idea.
