The errors that I make are all mechanical and local mainly they are the inability to see the small things like spelling and grammar as the year progresses I have learned how to try to deal with it. Mainly I have tried to edit more and read the sentences to my self-causing a better version of the work itself. The most parent when looked at a simple flow in the essay as the first sentence illustrates there are very little inflow and readability in the essay. I also feel as the essay continues through the essay, but there is clarity in the work itself. I know there is much more than I need to work on in not only in this essay as my grammar can only get better with the more practice I put in.
